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  1. beautifully written. feels like a deep breath taken before going under water. lungs expanding. at first it seems so freeing. yet as the time passes and the lungs start to burn. the chest want to explode. the glimpse of hope lies up as the eyes open and see the surface wink as the sun penetrates through. inviting one up. back to the world of the breathing.

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  2. inkowlme says:

    Wonderful, I enjoy how it flows.

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